100 Word Challenge Week #13


It was 6:30 pm, we had just learned a new jazz dance. We were done one quarter and it was just a mess. Everyone's turns were wobbly and we couldn't land them. And our kicks, we had bent knees and our hips weren't square. But our jumps were litterly the worst. We would leave at 9:30 so we had 3 hours left. The whole class wasn't even trying but they were exhausted. But I was putting so much effort and I wasn't even tried. All of a sudden at 7:30, everyone left but me. I don't where everyone went but I was alone.

Comments

  1. I liked how you used a creative flair with this new jazz dance and how everybody was failing so they all left. One thing you need to use is proper grammar. "Litterly" is not a word.

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  2. An over all great and creative story. The placement of the prompt is okay. It could have had more at the end of the sentence.

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  3. I enjoyed the way that you wrote it like you would think it and you criticized everything, but you used "But I was putting so much effort and I wasn't even tried." always proof-read before posting.

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